The day that Christopher Hitchens smoked a cigarette in my J-school classroom

I’m sad to hear of the death of Christopher Hitchens this evening, since we’ll have no more of his cantankerous essays, though I’m not sad for him. He wouldn’t want any of us to be, since as he saw it, he would just be ceasing to exist today. I think it’s probably not inappropriate, and maybe some how Hitchensian, to say that I’m sad for a very selfish reason to hear that he died: he was a contributor to [More], the 1970s journalism review I’m writing about for my dissertation. I would have liked to get the chance to interview him.

I did, however, get a chance to meet him. It was in the fall of 1999, in my first semester at the Columbia University Graduate School of Journalism. I took a class on opinion writing (I was probably ten years too young to appreciate that class properly) taught by Victor Navasky, who was then still the publisher of The Nation. Victor brought Hitchens to class as a guest speaker.

I honestly don’t remember much of what Hitchens said that day, though it was just a drop in the bucket of his output. I’m sure it was crotchety and possibly even vitriolic. But I was distracted by the cigarette.

He started out fine. He talked for a few minutes. Then he turned to Victor and said something like, “I assume there’s no smoking here?” Victor affirmed that assumption. Hitchens took out a cigarette anyway. He placed it in the corner of his mouth, and he kept talking, the cigarette bouncing up and down to the rhythms of his speech. A few more minutes passed. Maybe 15, 20.

He stopped talking, took the cigarette out of his mouth and faced the 15 or 20 of us in the seminar room.

“Does anyone in here mind if I smoke it?”

I don’t like cigarette smoke much, but we all looked at each other and more or less shrugged. Victor didn’t object either. And so Christopher Hitchens broke university policy, maybe city code. And smoked.

I don’t know what the link is between cigarettes and esophageal cancer, which is what killed him, finally. But it wouldn’t surprise me if we were watching him killing himself that afternoon. I think he probably knew he was, too. Whatever you think of Hitchens’s ideas, part of the fun of reading him was that he would defend his point to the death (literally), even if he didn’t necessarily believe it. His cigarette, right or wrong.

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“It only takes 20 minutes to shift the blame,” but far more than two months to establish the truth

Two months and a bit ago, I wrote a piece trying to analyze the two web write-throughs of the New York Times coverage of the NYPD arrests of hundreds of Occupy Wall Street protesters on the Brooklyn Bridge. Someone—and I still don’t know for certain who—took screen captures of these two versions of the story, pasted them side-by-side, and sent them around the Internet in an attempt to implicate the Times as being a capital-E Establishment pawn of the NYPD in telling the police side of the story. This was easily my most-viewed post, since it comes up high in the search results. And it got picked up by a commenter in an Austrian newspaper; by a left–wing podcaster; and by an information literacy class at ASA, a for-profit college in New York. I, too, got called out for being too soft on the Establishment by being too soft on the Times, though I honestly believed then—and continue to believe—that the change in the stories doesn’t reveal a malicious conspiracy, but is instead an artifact of the fluid nature of news and events and the difference between facts and truth. All of which would make a great seminar in journalism, politics and truth telling (and I did use the “20 minutes” image to spark discussions in both my Communication and Society classes and my News Editing class).

And the immediate impetus for this update does have something to do with truth (I realize I have now buried my own lead). This weekend, I received an email from Colin Moynihan, the reporter with the sole byline in the first version of the Brooklyn Bridge story. In my original post, I had written that “the Times was certainly slow to start covering the protests,” and I linked to a Philadelphia Daily News essay by Will Bunch, attacking “big media” for being slow to cover the protests. It had been the first article I read about the protests when the began, and I took it for true. Moynihan, who gave me permission to quote from his email, corrected me on the facts of Bunch’s essay:

I wanted to let you know that the Times wasn’t slow to start covering the Occupy Wall Street protests.  I was in the financial district on September 17, the first day of the protests and wrote a story that appeared on the Times website that day and was in the paper the following day.  I wrote another story on the third day of the protests.  By my count there were seven stories over the first nine days of the protests.

A list of the Times articles about OWS confirms this. Which I suppose goes to show that you can’t necessarily trust something just because it comes from a reputable source (depending on how you view the Philly Daily News). In my view, I’d say it is slightly less reputable now, not just because of the misrepresentation of the Times coverage, but also because of the strange new “update” at the top of the Will Bunch essay:

Corrected and edited to reflect the fact the [sic] one of Colin Moynihan’s earlier blog posts was reverse published in New York Times editions delivered to New York City residents — but not here in Philly and elsewhere — still doesn’t change the basic fact of undercoverage, at least until the mass arrests and pepper-spray incidents in the second weekend.

This reads to me like a grudging acknowledgment of being incorrect, though I can’t say I understand what Bunch means by “reverse published.” He may still be right that the first week or so of the protests were undercovered. That’s a judgment call, after all. But they were not not covered. In any case, I apologize to Colin Moynihan, and to readers, for using a shoddy source and for claiming to be “certain” about its assertions.

I should also point out here that if you look at the final version of the story, which I should have spent more time on in my original essay, you will see that there is actually a detailed description of the events leading up to the Brooklyn Bridge arrests:

Where the entrance to the bridge narrowed their path, some marchers, including organizers, stuck to the generally agreed-upon route and headed up onto the wooden walkway that runs between and about 15 feet above the bridge’s traffic lanes.

But about 20 others headed for the Brooklyn-bound roadway, said Christopher T. Dunn of the New York Civil Liberties Union, who accompanied the march. Some of them chanted ”take the bridge.” They were met by a handful of high-level police supervisors, who blocked the way and announced repeatedly through bullhorns that the marchers were blocking the roadway and that if they continued to do so, they would be subject to arrest.

There were no physical barriers, though, and at one point, the marchers began walking up the roadway with the police commanders in front of them – seeming, from a distance, as if they were leading the way. The Chief of Department Joseph J. Esposito, and a horde of other white-shirted commanders, were among them.

After allowing the protesters to walk about a third of the way to Brooklyn, the police then cut the marchers off and surrounded them with orange nets on both sides, trapping hundreds of people, said Mr. Dunn. As protesters at times chanted ”white shirts, white shirts,” officers began making arrests, at one point plunging briefly into the crowd to grab a man.

This “final” version of the story (see the postscript below for my explanation of the scare quotes) has bylines for Al Baker and Colin Moynihan, as well as a third author, Sarah Maslin Nir; and two other names are cited as having provided reporting. All of which goes to show that in covering something as complex and protean as a protest march in which hundreds of people are arrested, even five reporters is probably too few to ascertain “truth.” Reporters are human beings, and newspapers are human institutions. Both have limitations, but the good ones—and I usually count the Times among the good ones—are doing their best to get at that truth.

Postscript: I think we can also take away from this incident something about the changing nature of newsrooms. Many of those early stories that the Times ran began as Moynihan’s posts on the Times’s excellent City Room blog. The news blog format allows for the kind of temporal fluidity that constantly evolving news requires, in some way making the idea of a “final” version of a story, as I refer to above, almost laughable. Our understanding of the flow of events has changed, and there is no more news cycle. Time moves on and we learn more. We learn more and our understanding changes. It’s a challenge that reporters have always had to deal with, and those who post to blogs and Twitter understand that an article, the traditional unit of news, is no longer sufficient. It is just one slice in time, queued to the deadlines of dead tree media. Readers who are not enmeshed in the reporting process may be slower to understand that, but in a generation—when my students are the news consumers—they will get it.

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Knight Foundation funds ten academic applications of News Challenge projects

The only place I could find this interesting news was in my email, and on page 15 of the pdf version of the AEJMC newsletter. But I thought that this news was important, and since I couldn’t link to it otherwise, I’m posting it here. This is a great way to get innovative reporting projects integrated into programs that educate the young journalists who will use them, and inspire the young journalists who will invent the next generation of Knight News Challenge projects:

Building a Bridge Between the Knight News Challenge and JMC Programs 
2011-2012 Recipients

Through a grant from the John S. and James L. Knight Foundation, AEJMC has funded ten proposals to develop innovative and creative academic applications of projects already funded through the Knight News Challenge. The goal is to implement these projects in ways that enhance the education of future journalists for the new media landscape. Individual grants are up to $8,000 each.

Recipients of 2011-12 Bridge Grants (alpha)

  1. Ingrid Bachmann and Sebastian Valenzuela, Universidad Catolica de Chile; (Ushahidi) “Adopting Ushahidi for Crowdsourcing and Data Visualization: New Paths for Event-mapping in Chile”
  2. Peter (Piotr) Bobkowski, University of Kansas; (Printcasting/FeedBrewer) “Kansas.com High School News Feed”
  3. Serena Carpenter and Nancie Dodge, Arizona State University; (CityCircles) “CityCircles Light Rail Job Classifieds”
  4. Julie Jones and John Schmeltzer, University of Oklahoma; (Ushahidi) “Reporting from the Storm”
  5. Jacqueline Marino, Kent State University; “OpenBlock Campus”
  6. Ray Murray, Oklahoma State University; (DocumentCloud) “In-depth Reporting of Methamphetamine Production and Abuse in Oklahoma”
  7. Cindy Royal and Jacie Yang, Texas State University San Marcos; (VIDI) “Telling Stories with Data: Life at a Hispanic Serving University”
  8. Hyunjin Seo, University of Kansas. (OpenBlock) “LarryvilleKU: Web and Mobile Application of OpenBlock to The Kansan”
  9. Adam Wagler, University of Nebraska-Lincoln; (BookBrewer,Politiwidgets, DocumentCloud) “Photojournalism and Social Engagement Tablet App”
  10. Amy Schmitz Weiss, San Diego State University; (Ushahidi) “@SDSU – Where’s the News?”

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“It only takes 20 minutes to shift the blame,” and only a screen grab to implicate the Times

"it only takes 20 minutes to shift the blame"There is an image making the rounds on Facebook right now, an annotated dual screen capture of the New York Times front page story on the Brooklyn Bridge arrests that were the dramatic high point of the Occupy Wall Street protests over the weekend. The left side of the image shows a screen capture taken at 6:59 p.m., on Saturday, October 1. The lead it quotes at that time reads:

After allowing them onto the bridge, the police cut off and arrested dozens of Occupy Wall Street demonstrators.

This excerpt clearly blames police and implies entrapment. In this version, police led protesters to their arrest by baiting them to do something illegal.

Version two of this story, which the screen grabber grabbed at 7:19 p.m. (giving us the 20 minute difference referenced in the glaring pink type), has a much more sedate, New York Timesy lead:

In a tense showdown over the East River, police arrested hundreds of Occupy Wall Street demonstrators after they marched onto the bridge’s Brooklyn-bound roadway.

The screengrabber obviously wants to imply that somewhere in the 20 minutes between screenshots, the Times either bowed to police pressure or at least changed the lead on its own to avoid pissing off One Police Plaza and probably also the mayor. In this reading, it is one powerful institution protecting another, which is exactly the sort of narrative lens through which Occupy Wall Street protesters, and our anonymous screen grabber, see the world.

And it may be true.

But there could be a lot less going on here. First, I’ll note that the whole “20 minutes” thing, while sloganariffic, isn’t exactly true. As I’d have my news editing students do, I’ll have you do the math. Study the screenshot and get back to me…. OK, got it? If you look closely, you’ll see that while the two grabs were taken 20 minutes apart, the stories were actually published 58 minutes apart. But that’s a minor point, even if “It takes just under an hour to shift the blame” doesn’t sound nearly as revolutionary.

More importantly, the second write-through doesn’t blame the protesters. In fact, it doesn’t blame anyone. The cause-and-effect sequence of the first version isn’t changed; it’s just removed.

Look at the byline, too. We’ve added a new reporter to the story in the last hour. Maybe he came back from the scene and told his editor that the cause-and-effect of the first version wasn’t as clear-cut as the first reporter thought it was. Maybe he had reason to believe that the first version of the story was the protesters’ version, and that the police disputed that. After all, only the police and the first ranks of marchers probably could have heard police warnings or seen police ushering the crowd onto (or attempting, in vain, to keep them off) the bridge.

The first version of the story, if it is true, is the stronger version. If we know that police actually did lure the marchers to their arrests, then the second version of the story is wishy-washy. But if we don’t know, we can’t, as journalists, lead with a tenuous claim. There are some very bad reasons to do he said/she said reporting. But on the Internet, when facts are still coming in, the right way to report is to lay both sides out there until you can get at a verified account of the truth.

And that’s why you shouldn’t use the editing process to create propaganda. If the NYT really is protecting the NYPD (and the Times was certainly slow to start covering the protests), the story will get out eventually.

Note (7:47 p.m.): I omitted any citation for the original image, because I wasn’t able to track down where it came from. The best I can tell, this is the original source: http://www.facebook.com/Schooloftheamericaswatch

Update (10:21 p.m.): I was poking around the referring links to this post today, largely because this is the single highest-traffic post I’ve had, and I found this. As the commenter on that page points out, Al Baker is a police reporter for the Times (the commenter calls him “NYPD biased,” though I haven’t read enough of his work to judge, and he did co-write the Times article about the pepper-spraying “white shirt” officer Anthony Bologna).That he is a police reporter, however, is certainly worth noting, since beat reporters can have a tendency to write from the point of view of their sources, no matter how skeptical they see themselves. Colin Moynihan, the first author of the story, has been following the protesters in his recent work. The different POVs seem likely to have contributed to the change between the two versions of the story here, whether or not there’s conscious bias at work.

Update (December 14, 2011): I received an email from Colin Moynihan, and have written a follow-up to this original post.

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The night that Sarah Jessica Parker stepped on my foot and the world changed

Correction appended: Where I say “Kenneth Cole,” I mean Marc Jacobs. Memory fails ten years on. Thanks to Kelly Crow herself for fact checking me.

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Ten years ago today, September 10, 2001, my friend Kelly Crow had invited me to be her plus one at the Kenneth Cole fashion show. Kelly was working as a contract writer for the New York Times then, and she was covering the event for the now-defunct City section that ran on Sundays. She probably wasn’t supposed to be covering the fashion, per se. It was more of a scene piece. Anyway, I wasn’t supposed to be writing anything at all. I was working as the web editor for Architectural Record magazine, and there were never any big architecture stories, right?

I think we met somewhere on West Street, the broad boulevard that runs down the west side of Manhattan, sometimes living up to the sort of urban grandeur that the phrase “broad boulevard” evokes, and sometimes just existing as an exhaust-choked multi-lane highway dividing nice parts of the city from piers owned by (and smelling like) the sanitation department. That night, though, we were going to be sitting in a tent erected on one of the flat piers out in the Hudson. It was, like so many of these outdoor events, temporary elegance. I probably walked over from the A/C/E subway lines, but many of the guests came in black cars with drivers. Ten years later, I still don’t have a driver.

Cole was debuting his fragrance for women that night. Kelly got a gift bag with samples. I remember low pools in the entrance area with flowers floating in them. I want to say they were jasmine, because I remember them being white. But I also remember them floating, so maybe they were lotus. Whichever they were, that’s what the perfume smelled like. The walls of the entrance area were just white waterproof canvas or vinyl or whatever those shiny white tents are made of. There were cameras, and celebrities. Sarah Jessica Parker put the heel of one of her (Manolo Blahnik?) shoes on top of whatever I was wearing, and she turned to look up at me. “Oh my god, I’m so sorry,” she said. “Did I hurt you?” She didn’t, of course. She isn’t exactly a large woman.

Kelly and I were ushered to our seats, near the top of the long rows of benches on either side of the runway. We sat there. Forever. The show started nowhere close to on time. For a while, we watched the crowd—fashion editors, beautiful people, beautiful young people (these were Kenneth Cole’s employees), Donald Trump. Trump was, I think, on our side of the runway, but he’s easy to identify from above and behind. We probably sat for 45 minutes on the uncomfortable benches, while only two songs alternated on the loudspeakers: “2000 Light Years from Home,” by the Rolling Stones; and either “Psyché Rock” by Pierre Henry and  Michel Colombier, or the more familiar song that it was reworked into, and which you may know as the theme from “Futurama.” I think it was the Futurama theme version, but ten years later, I can’t be sure. Either way I heard each of those songs probably ten times that night.

I don’t remember the fashion show. There were dresses. They were probably quite pretty. Beats me.

After the show was over, the back wall of the runway opened up, as if by magic, and the crowd filtered down to runway level, and then out onto the end of the pier, which was tentless, and set up as a cocktail reception, with Moby DJing. As we shuffled out there, Kelly took the opportunity to interview Monica Lewinsky, who I think was about to introduce a line of handbags.

We must have had a drink or an hors d’oeuvre or two, but I don’t think we stayed too late. I’m not sure what Kelly was going to be doing the next morning, but she had to get home to Brooklyn. I was going to take the train back to the Upper West Side, where I lived in a little studio on the block that now houses the first indoor Shake Shack. I could sleep in a little bit the next morning, since Architectural Record was having its sales meeting downtown at the offices of our sister company, Standard & Poor’s. I think I was supposed to show up there at 11, so I wouldn’t have to leave the apartment until after 10.

As it turned out, Kelly never got a chance to write her story about the Kenneth Cole show. I wonder if she still has her notes from that night. But there was other news that blotted out the smell of jasmine or lotus the next morning, and made fashion seem so suddenly frivolous. As it happened, it was, in a small way, architecture news, news that would lead Architectural Record’s team, of which I was proud to be a part, to a National Magazine Award. I made a brief part of my career interviewing architects of memorials.

But we didn’t know any of that on the evening of September 10. Kelly and I, before we left the pier, wandered out to the very far end of it, which was open to the clear, cool, black sky, and we looked downriver and then panned our heads upward at the two square towers, glimmering between the vertical columns that lined their solid bulk, with the office lights of late-night traders, patrons, of the bar at Windows on the World, and of course, the blinking red of their aircraft warning lights.

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The Wall Street Journal tells itself its 9/11 story

According to an internal memo sent out this morning, the Wall Street Journal is planning on having a gathering on Monday, September 12 to commemorate the paper’s coverage of the 9/11 attacks. At the time, the Journal had not yet moved to its current home in the News Corp building on 6th Avenue in Midtown (nor, of course, did Rupert Murdoch own it), and was instead headquartered in the World Financial Center, literally across the street from the WTC.

I wonder: are any other news organizations having internal oral history gatherings like this one?

From: Dow Jones Internal Communications
Sent: Friday, September 02, 2011 11:43 AM
To: NewYork_1211_AOA_All; Lynch, John; PR-Communications
Subject: Special Edition Breakfast Briefing – 9/11: The Journal’s Story
When: Monday, September 12, 2011 10:00 AM-11:00 AM.
Where: Training Room, Third floor, 1211 AoA

When: Monday, September 12, 2011 10:00 AM-11:00 AM (GMT-05:00) Eastern Time (US & Canada).
Where: Training Room, Third floor, 1211 AoA

Note: The GMT offset above does not reflect daylight saving time adjustments.

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Join us for a special Breakfast Briefing in 1211 as we mark the 10-year anniversary of the Sept. 11 attack by telling the Journal’s story of that day.

A panel of veterans, all of whom were involved in the crisis and recovery, discuss how the Journal was bombed out of its main newsroom that day and how it still managed to make a newspaper and to tell the tragic and heroic story unfolding around it.

The panel will be moderated by Howard Hoffman (today vice president for corporate affairs and in 2001 a senior editor at the Journal) and includes:

  • Jim Pensiero, today editor-in-chief of DJ FX Trader and deputy managing editor at the Journal,  in 2001 he was an assistant managing editor at the Journal
  • Dave Pettit, today markets data editor for Dow Jones and in 2001 deputy managing editor for WSJ.com
  • John Bussey, today an assistant managing editor and columnist for the Journal, in 2001 he was the paper’s foreign editor
  • John Lynch, today a director for editorial and publishing applications was in 2001 manager of news and ad services systems.

Light refreshments will be served.

Space is limited so please RVSP early to attend.

When: 10-11 a.m. on Monday, 12 Sept.
Where: Training room, third floor, 1211 AoA

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Intellectual Heft: A.J. Liebling as a Critic of Anti-Intellectualism in American Journalism

I will be attending the AEJMC annual conference this week in St. Louis. If you’re going to be there, drop by the History Division poster session on Wednesday at 3:15 p.m. This is the abstract for my paper:

One aspect of A.J. Liebling’s tenure as the press critic for The New Yorker that has not been previously explored is his role as an opponent of the anti-intellectual tendencies of American journalism. This paper examines all 82 of Liebling’s Wayward Press columns and finds that his essays regularly fit into the three categories of anti-intellectualism identified by Richard Hofstadter and codified by sociologist Daniel Rigney, as well as a fourth, new, category of anti-intellectualism endemic to professional journalism.

I’m embedding a pdf file of my handout, but it’s worth it to come see the full poster, and of course to say hi.

Liebling Poster Handout (pdf)

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The profile of Rupert Murdoch that Rupert Murdoch killed

Killer Bee Reaches New York, More magazine, February 1977Rupert Murdoch had already been living in New York for three years before most of the city’s journalism establishment cared much about who he was. Sure, he owned a few papers around the country, and he was known for having turned The News of the World from a winkingly naughty paper that hid behind a screen of Victorian propriety into the screaming scandal sheet that it remained until this year. And of course he was also known for being an Australian press lord. He was that even in 1976, when Elisabeth, Lachlan and James were 8, 5 and 4. But in New York, he was quiet, a one man sleeper cell getting the feel for a new place—making friends with Clay Felker, the man who bought New York magazine from the ashes of the New York Herald-Tribune and turned it into the first city magazine, and then, through Felker, Murdoch made the acquaintance of Dorothy Schiff, the longtime Roosevelt liberal (and rumored Roosevelt paramour) who had turned America’s oldest newspaper into a tabloid aimed at a diminishing, mostly Jewish, educated middle class readership.

And then Rupert struck, buying the Post from his New York social scene acquaintance, Dolly Schiff. She was a cantankerous, capricious publisher, to be sure, and even those writers who respected her and were loyal to her didn’t seem to like her much. But still, the sale of the Post to the Australian press lord? That was a story (one, it seems, that the Post itself was scooped on).

More Magazine, February 1977

More, February 1977

Clay Felker wasn’t going to let this story get away, though. He too was unpredictable as an editor, but most of the time, people threw in words like “extremely talented” or even “genius.” The man had more or less invented a category of media, and had nurtured the careers of “New Journalists” like Tom Wolfe, Jimmy Breslin and his own wife, Gail Sheehy. So Felker jumped into editorial action when the Post/Murdoch news broke. New York commissioned cover art from illustrator David Levine, known for his New York Review of Books caricatures. Levine came back with a portrait of Rupert as a killer bee, his stinger pointed toward the base of the new World Trade Center towers, and his ham-pink, crosshatched face recognizable at age 45 even to someone who was born a month or two after the picture was commissioned, and who therefore somehow assumes that Murdoch started life as a septuagenarian.

And for the profile itself, Felker’s magazine enlisted a pair of writers, showing in his choices some of that editorial acumen he was known for. Presumably to handle the New York angle, but with knowledge of Britain, Felker charged Jon Bradshaw, a New York contributing editor who had also written a book about backgammon, of all things, and had worked as a writer in England (at the Sunday Times, long before Murdoch bought that, too). And to get the Australian side of things, Felker turned to Richard Neville, the co-founder of an Australian satirical magazine called Oz, a magazine that between its Australian and English versions, got Neville involved in no fewer than three obscenity trials (and earned him the honor of being played in movies by both Hugh Grant and Cillian Murphy).

And then, before they went to press, the story and the illustration were killed. Rupert Murdoch had bought New York.

A January, 1977 article in Time claims that “Felker thought better of it,” though it also implies that the illustration was a reaction to the news that Murdoch had wrested New York away from Felker, which seems bizarre, unless it was commissioned in the period when Murdoch was still wresting and Felker was still clinging to his beloved creation. What seems more likely is that the story and cover illustration were commissioned in that brief period (less than two months, Thanksgiving to New Year’s!) between Murdoch’s purchase of the Post and his takeover of New York. And if Rupert Murdoch owned New York, there was no way down under that it would be running a comprehensive cover story about the boss’s past.

The story did eventually run, just not in New York. Across town, a small but influential journalism review called More had been publishing the work of an impressive slate of journalists and critics since 1971 (though the subscription list would be sold to the Columbia Journalism Review the next year). According to the italicized blurb that introduced the article in the February, 1977 issue of More, the article and illustration (which More ran on its own cover) ”were commissioned before Rupert Murdoch acquired control of that publication.”

More had already run a pretty extensive package on Murdoch’s Post coup, just the month before. The January number featured an article on how Murdoch’s takeover of the Post might result in “old-fashioned newspaper war,” especially if the Daily News dared to enter the evening newspaper market (though of course it was the Post that switched to mornings). There was a collection of memoirs of Dolly Schiff by former Post people Pete Hamill, and Nora Ephron and by indy muckraker and proto-blogger I.F. Stone. (Frank Rich’s recent piece, published in New York as serendipity would have it, would have fit in just fine in this collection.) Doug Ireland, a veteran of the Post, as well as New York and a third publication that wound up under Murdoch in the New York deal, the Village Voice,  wrote the main news story, as well as a sidebar on how the Newspaper Guild would handle Murdoch if he tried to fire their unionized employees. “He ain’t gettin’ rid of nobody in Guild jurisdiction,” Ireland quoted the executive vice president of the Guild as saying. “We don’t exist as a severance paying mechanism.” As Rich points out in his piece, Murdoch didn’t have to fire them. He just drove them (most of them, anyway) away.

But even with all of this prior coverage, how could More turn down the opportunity to run the profile of Rupert Murdoch that might have been inspired by Rupert Murdoch’s looming takeover of the magazine that commissioned it, and that was doomed by the fact that Rupert Murdoch conquered that magazine, leaving story and illustration unceremoniously—or even better, ceremoniously—impaled on a spike?

Given what we now know about Rupert Murdoch, the profile isn’t shocking (though it is slightly odd that Neville quotes himself in the third person). We learn about his charlesfosterkanian beginnings in Australia, redeeming his father’s lost newspaper career. We learn about his first attempt to own a “respectable” paper when he founds The Australian. We learn about the takeover of The News of the World. There’s even a seven-column spread of 21 covers of the Daily Mirror from 1976, most of which have pretty prosaic headlines, given the “Headless Body in Topless Bar” excesses that were to come at the Post.

The one story that sticks out, and except for this piece in The Daily Beast, seems to have largely been forgotten is the shocking and incredibly relevant (given the centrality of Milly Dowler to Rupert’s current kerfuffle) story of Digby Bamford. Here is Bradshaw and Neville (and given the kicker to this story, likely more Neville than Bradshaw)’s version of the story in full:

One day in March 1964, a bewildered migrant walked into the offices of Murdoch’s Daily Mirror, clutching his daughter’s diary in his hand. Appalled by what he had read, he sought advice from the seemingly omnipotent arbiters of community taste. For other reasons, the Mirror shared the migrant’s concerns and decided to print the contents of the little red book on its front page: “Sex Outrage in School Lunchbreak,” the Mirror blared. Reproduced passages of the girl’s diary spoke of secret rendezvous and sexual encounters with schoolmates. As a result of the publicity, the 14-year-old girl and her “boyfriend,” Digby Bamford, were expelled from school. And for Murdoch’s readers, that is where the story ended. It was never reported that the following day, young Digby Bamford was found hanging from a clothesline in his backyard; nor was it ever reported that a pathologist from the children’s welfare department filed a report of the incident in which he stated that the 14-year-old girl was still a virgin.

Only Richard Neville’s “obscene” publication, Oz, printed the whole story at the time.

It’s a shame that More isn’t digitized, though the magazine’s founding editor, Richard Pollak, tried and failed to get Google to add its press run to its digital archive. The Bradshaw and Neville profile would have made a more than worthy addition to longform.org’s recent compilation of Murdoch profiles. But what this 1977 profile in More—one which was published almost exactly my entire lifetime ago—shows, is that we knew who Rupert Murdoch was long before the NOTW phone hacking scandals.  And even then it was old news, as Bradshaw and Neville saw:

Since 1952 he has built his bordello of newspapers across three continents. For 25 years, his papers have been purveyors of cheap thrills, inciters of death and false alarms, advocates of obsolete prejudices, saboteurs of taste, hawkers of back seats and second fiddles, of cocks and bulls.

So our assessment today of Murdoch isn’t hindsight. It’s just sight. We’ve seen it all along. It’s just that until now, we’ve also played along. The subhead to the More story asks, “Is this the future?” And the answer, of course, is yes. Yes it was.

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Press criticism should be personal, not institutional

In one of his many masterful essays of clear thinking and lucid prose, the late journalism and media scholar Jim Carey wrote:

It is a remarkable fact that each year most of us read more words by a reporter such as Homer Bigart of the New York Times than we do of Plato and yet today 2500 years after Plato wrote there is more critical work published on Plato every year than there is on Bigart. In fact, there is nothing published on Bigart, here used as an archetypal reporter, yet what he writes provides the critical diet for a major segment of the national “elite” community.

The late James Carey

Carey published this (institutional subscription required) in 1974, and unfortunately Homer Bigart is no longer with us. What is still with us though is the fact that American journalism remains under-criticized. This might sound like a naive and shocking claim if you were to take “criticized” to mean “attacked.” But as Carey argues, real criticism isn’t about picking on the perceived faults of your subject. It is about clarifying the culture’s relationship to that work. And even 37 years after Carey wrote, there is very little of that sort of criticism going on.

There is much to be said on this topic, and that’s why I’m writing my dissertation about a journal of press criticism. But I do want to make one suggestion that occurred to me as I was rereading that Carey essay on press criticism today, the one encapsulated in this post’s title. Press criticism would be improved—and I think the press’s respons to criticism would be as well—if press criticism were less about institutions and more about individuals.

This is an outgrowth of the century-long move toward transparency and accountability as replacements for a mistaken interpretation of “objectivity” as a professional norm for the press. First, reporters started writing below bylines, so the public knew who wrote what. Now, we’re moving toward increased transparency and responsiveness, with reporters acknowledging their backgrounds and associations and answering questions from readers on social media. This is all to the good.

But most press criticism still looks at news organizations as monoliths, not as collections of individual voices. So we should start to look at criticism of the press more like movie criticism (a slightly more populist analogy than Plato, methinks). Quick: name the movie studio that released your favorite movie. Yeah, I can’t do it either. I’m not sure I could, off the top of my head, associate a single movie with the studio that produced it (maybe some high period Miramax, and of course Pixar and Disney). But what about Paramount or Universal? Do they have a style? An agenda? Maybe. But I don’t know what it is. I do, however, recognize the work of my favorite directors or authors, and I think it’s more productive to criticize the Coen Brothers than it is to criticize—wait, let me look up who released Fargo—PolyGram.

Individual journalists would no longer be able to hide behind a publication’s masthead, and those who don’t already take enormous pride in their work might start to do so, knowing that they would be judged as artists or craftspeople. Besides, I know quite a few journalists who got into the field because they like to write (or broadcast or shoot video or design graphics or whatever), and a culture that looked at them as semi-autonomous actors (because, let’s face it, journalists working for news organizations are more like architects or film directors than they are like entirely independent authors or artists) might reinvigorate their initial love for what they do, and de-emphasize the corporate cog feeling that many large-organization journalists feel.

Obviously, this won’t work for everything. If a news organization (or the U.S. press in general) ignores an important story for whatever reason, that is obviously an institutional or systemic problem, and press critics shouldn’t feel that they need to limit themselves to reviews of works. Journalism has a broader social and cultural charge than movies, and it’s hard to pick on a movie that doesn’t get made. Movie criticism (like most journalism) is reactive. Criticism can be active and probing, but for the most part, press criticism is doing better with its social function than with its cultural one.

But this mode of criticism can be more positive. Which isn’t to say that it would be all of the time, or even most of the time, but press criticism as it exists now mostly is negative criticism. I think that recommendation engines like longform.org are actually practicing a valuable sort of criticism in the selection and canonization of works of journalism that are doing something right.

And I suspect most journalists would welcome this kind of criticism. After all, as Carey wrote in that same 1974 essay, “Criticism is not the mark of failure and irrelevance; it is the sign of vigor and importance.”

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The BulletinPoint system: inverted pyramids, reader convenience and a new style of news writing

There has been talk lately about how the basic unit of journalism (at least the basic unit of print journalism, and one of the basic units of online journalism), the article, has reached the end of its cycle of utility. (John Bethune has a good summary of some of the arguments, including those by Jeff Jarvis and Matthew Ingram.)

Is the article dead?

I wouldn’t say that the article is a dying art form, since the article encompasses so many things, but I do have a proposal for revamping one particular kind of article, which really seems to be the kind that is under discussion here, and that is the breaking news story. This is the so-called “inverted pyramid” style of writing, where the reporter opens with a lead (or in journo-speak, a “lede”) that summarizes the event in 30 words or so, then proceeds to add details in what she and her editors determine is the descending order of importance to an imagined reader. History isn’t entirely clear on when this style of writing first popped up, but it became standardized in the late 19th and early 20th centuries.

It’s a form of reader convenience. No one reads the whole newspaper, so the trick to getting the most out of reading the newspaper is to scan the headlines, then read the leads, and then continue deeper into the stories that you actually care about. Twitter can’t entirely replace this form of writing, of course. Twitter is just the summary lead—the bulletin update. Articles can provide context, and background and analysis and even narrative. (And I’m completely excluding here the new trend toward long-form journalism online and on tablets and such.) So let’s rethink how we present a breaking news article—the kind of article we used to write in inverted pyramid form.

At the very least, use subheads

I can understand why newspapers avoided subheads. Space is precious. Preserve each pica! But online, stories should have clear, easy-to-skip, divisions that allow a restless reader’s eye to go directly to the part of the story he wants to read. You could have one that says “News Summary” at the top. One that says “Background.” One that says “Possible Causes” for a fire or a plane crash. One that says “Political Implications.” One that says “Events Leading up to This” or something better worded. I tell my news writing students to write as if they were answering questions that a reader has in her mind, in the order that they think those questions would be asked. How much better would it be for each one of those answers to be encapsulated in an easy-to-find paragraph with its own subhead?

Even better, give each subhead an anchor link

Some news organizations have begun adding anchors to each paragraph so that bloggers can link not only to the source article for information, but also the exact paragraph where that info comes from. Now, they should think about putting a table of contents at the top of each article and linking to each of the relevant subheads, so that readers can find what they need as quickly as they can. If you’re an avid news consumer and you already read the day one story, you might not need all of the background. If you’re reading the Poughkeepsie Journal in Bangalore, maybe you don’t need the paragraph on how some new federal legislation (that is of broad international interest) would affect residents of Dutchess County, so you can easily skip it.

Still better: collapsible paragraphs

Or… you could make the table of contents the only thing that a reader sees when he comes to that page. An entire news story could be presented as a series of paragraph-summary bullet points, with tiny arrows next to each point, like the arrows a Mac or PC user is already used to clicking on to expand a sub-folder. Clicking on the arrow would bring up the full paragraph that gives all of the details implied in the summary bullet point.

I actually toyed around with starting a company based on this idea—or at least launching a mobile app. I called the idea “BulletinPoint.” BulletinPoint. Get it? Like bullet points, except for news?

Anyway.

I still like the name, and I think that the BulletinPoint system of writing could make a good tweak of the old inverted pyramid, which, after all, was all about feeding users as much information as they want in the most convenient way possible.

Feel free to teach it to your students, or implement it in your CMS. Just give me a nod if you do.

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